Run internet chapter through hemingway

Author: Videocard

en/how_the_internet_works/README.md

@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@
 
 We bet you use the Internet every day. But do you actually know what happens when you type an address like http://djangogirls.org into your browser and press 'Enter'?
 
-The first thing you need to understand is that a website is just a bunch of files saved on a hard disk. Just like your movies, music or pictures.
+The first thing you need to understand is that a website is just a bunch of files saved on a hard disk. Just like your movies, music, or pictures.
 However, there is one part that is unique for websites: they include computer code called HTML.
 
-If you're not familiar with programming, it can be hard to grasp HTML at first, but your web browsers (like Chrome, Safari, Firefox, etc.) love it. Web browsers are designed to understand this code,
-follow its instructions and present all these files that your website is made of exactly the way you want them to be presented.
+If you're not familiar with programming it can be hard to grasp HTML at first, but your web browsers (like Chrome, Safari, Firefox, etc.) love it. Web browsers are designed to understand this code,
+follow its instructions, and present these files that your website is made of, exactly the way you want.
 
 As with every file, we need to store HTML files somewhere on a hard disk. For the Internet, we use special, powerful computers called *servers*. They don't have
 a screen, mouse or a keyboard, because their main purpose is to store data and serve it. That's why they're called *servers* -- because they *serve* you data.
@@ -31,17 +31,17 @@ It looks like this:
 
 Imagine that when you type http://djangogirls.org, you send a letter that says: "Dear Django Girls, I want to see the djangogirls.org website. Send it to me, please!"
 
-Your letter goes to the post office closest to you. Then it goes to another that is a bit nearer to your addressee, then to another and another till it is delivered at its destination. The only unique thing is that if you send letters (*data packets*) frequently to the same place, each letter might go through totally different post offices (*routers*), depending on how they are distributed in each office.
+Your letter goes to the post office closest to you. Then it goes to another that is a bit nearer to your addressee, then to another, and another until it is delivered at its destination. The only unique thing is that if you send many letters (*data packets*) to the same place, they could go through totally different post offices (*routers*). This depends on how they are distributed at each office.
 
 ![Figure 1.4](images/internet_4.png)
 
 Yes, it is as simple as that. You send messages and you expect some response. Of course, instead of paper and pen you use bytes of data, but the idea is the same!
 
-Instead of addresses with a street name, city, zip code and country name, we use IP addresses. Your computer first asks the DNS (Domain Name System) to translate djangogirls.org into an IP address. It works a little bit like old-fashioned phonebooks where you could look for the name of the person you want to contact and find their phone number and address.
+Instead of addresses with a street name, city, zip code and country name, we use IP addresses. Your computer first asks the DNS (Domain Name System) to translate djangogirls.org into an IP address. It works a little bit like old-fashioned phonebooks where you could look up the name of the person you want to contact and find their phone number and address.
 
-When you send a letter, it needs to have certain features to be delivered correctly: an address, stamp etc. You also use a language that the receiver understands, right? The same is with *data packets* you send in order to see a website: you use a protocol called HTTP (Hypertext Transfer Protocol).
+When you send a letter, it needs to have certain features to be delivered correctly: an address, stamp etc. You also use a language that the receiver understands, right? The same applies to the *data packets* you send to see a website. We use a protocol called HTTP (Hypertext Transfer Protocol).
 
-So, basically, when you have a website you need to have a *server* (machine) where it lives. The *server* is waiting for any incoming *requests* (letters that ask the server to send your website) and it sends back your website (in another letter).
+So, basically, when you have a website, you need to have a *server* (machine) where it lives. When the *server* receives an incoming *request*, (in a letter) it sends back your website (in another letter).
 
 Since this is a Django tutorial, you will ask what Django does. When you send a response, you don't always want to send the same thing to everybody. It is so much better if your letters are personalized, especially for the person that has just written to you, right? Django helps you with creating these personalized, interesting letters :).